Halo from hell

Halo from hell

A Poem by Mr.e
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Discovering divine enlightenment within the depths of hell...

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Opposing the light

future demons led the march

the soul went through hell

 

Mysterious light

the spirits path was revealed

heaven was distant

 

Opposing shadows

blinded demons fell behind

the soul was set free


© 2017 Mr.e



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I love the simplicity of it, yet it grabbed my attention!

Posted 3 Months Ago


Mr.e

3 Months Ago

Thanks for reading Norah.
In some tradditions you have to go through hell to get to heaven. The 'mysterious light' is a light to wonder at. I am glad that the soul was set free'

Posted 3 Months Ago


Mr.e

3 Months Ago

Thank you Astri!
Thanks for your words of wisdom and reading my work Phil oz o'fee, (love the screen name btw) come back anytime.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Thanks for the read and review Annette, you are too sweet...

Posted 5 Months Ago


The action of enlightening can be a two edged sword – one side cutting through negativity and the other revealing a side of ourselves we may not like! Loved the verses and imagery of your write – a wisdom lesson of quality! :-)

Posted 5 Months Ago


Love the image- divine light shining through all the circles of hell to save the errant soul. Beautiful Haiku form and transcendent words. "The soul was set free"-Yes! Excellent poem.

Posted 5 Months Ago


I know the song, I just can't pin the title...anyway, thanks for reading Jacob.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Annette Pisano Higley

5 Months Ago

Steve Miller Band-Jet Airliner!
Mr.e

5 Months Ago

Thank you Annette!
there was a song once said "you've got to go through hell to get to heaven"

and it is so true...

Posted 5 Months Ago



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