is anyone there?

Do I fall asleep

If the night fails to fall

And the sky remains flat blue

Do I stay awake 

Forever in my bed

Here by myself

Stuck in my twisted mind

In my dream

The moon came down

And devoured

All the nightmares

Then it rose and it found it's place among the stars

Oh no I think I miss the face of my lover

Oh I miss my dreams and my nightmares

And

It feels like my bed is shrinking

And I feel like I'm running out of time

And I don't know what to do anymore

Is anyone there?

Reviews

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

This is deep and has allot of feeling and emotion to it.
I to can relate as William says, some of us do have trouble sleeping as so many thoughts go through our brains, sometimes we cant shout them off.
I enjoyed this read, keep writing :)

[William Liston]

I like how you used unrealistic imagery in this piece ... it reflects the "nightmare" theme expressed in this piece. I could relate to this poem because I have all sorts of thoughts at night. At night, when I can't sleep, I often look at the moon and stars and just let my mind wonder. I think you created that feeling very well in this piece. Thanks for sharing.

- William Liston