Through Your Eyes

Through Your Eyes

A Poem by Mehameha
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This simply can't be. Is that what you see? It's blinding
The colors are strange. Your world rearranged, unwinding
From your point of view, I see you're no shrew
Is that what you see when you look at me
Defining

I borrowed your sight, and try as I might, I'm failing
It's like a new world, Flag briskly unfurled, unveiling
So clear with your eyes, the horrible lies,
That's how I appear? Heart hit with my spear?
Impaling





© 2017 Mehameha



Author's Note

Mehameha
This is an unfinished work and I may add more as inspiration affords.

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Powerful, strong and honest words shared. Your words made the thoughts come alive. Thank you Mehameha for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Months Ago


trying to imagine how others see us, from their perspective...gives us a hint into who we are...and we might realize that our behavior definitely needs to be improved.

j.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Mehameha

11 Months Ago

Thanks again for reading and commenting. I like the concept of this but I feel the style is all wron.. read more

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Mehameha
Mehameha

Honolulu, HI



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