Through Your Eyes

Through Your Eyes

A Poem by Mehameha
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This simply can't be. Is that what you see? It's blinding
The colors are strange. Your world rearranged, unwinding
From your point of view, I see you're no shrew
Is that what you see when you look at me
Defining

I borrowed your sight, and try as I might, I'm failing
It's like a new world, Flag briskly unfurled, unveiling
So clear with your eyes, the horrible lies,
That's how I appear? Heart hit with my spear?
Impaling





© 2017 Mehameha



Author's Note

Mehameha
This is an unfinished work and I may add more as inspiration affords.

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Powerful, strong and honest words shared. Your words made the thoughts come alive. Thank you Mehameha for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Months Ago


trying to imagine how others see us, from their perspective...gives us a hint into who we are...and we might realize that our behavior definitely needs to be improved.

j.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Mehameha

6 Months Ago

Thanks again for reading and commenting. I like the concept of this but I feel the style is all wron.. read more

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Mehameha
Mehameha

Honolulu, HI



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