Idealistic stiflings

Stunting the growth

of our spirituality

with the stiflings

of our religions. 

Idealistic judgments

thrown outwardly

toward anything

but ourselves. 

Our children

pushed closer

to hypocrisy

behind curtains

of curiosity. 

Humiliated parents

with plastic faces

and pressed clothes

in wooden pews.

 

M.J.S.

2-18-08

Reviews

[Fantasyfairy]

Nice point of view. Thanx for sharing it with us. This is a well written poem. XX

[*~Poetic_Essence~*]

This is a great poem..i like your Point Of View..
"Our children
pushed closer
to hypocrisy
behind curtains
of curiosity."

[Brenda Sue]

Wonderfully written. Great job.

[Cynthia Yildirim]

oh I like this poem very much, it is written with great intent I can tell. :)

[MorganLyn]

Ahh the reality of the world noone wants to admit.
wonderfully expressed. I agree with you :)

[Legion]

Damn good piece. You've pointed a flaw in ourselves and our societies. Check out my piece "Hypocrisy" when you get a chance.