Birthday Blues

Birthday Blues

A Poem by Melanie Jane Boicourt Shanks

Another year gone.

Secret wishes to candles;

to be young again.

 

 

 

© 2008 Melanie Jane Boicourt Shanks


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Aw! The pic sealed the deal-this was too funny and yet painfully true :) + :0

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hahaha I'm sorry I can't honestly say I know what that feels like :D
I'm still wishing to be old enough to drive, old enough to get out of the house, and old enough to love without judgmental eyes ....
great write!
-D

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wonderfully penned. Great write.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like and hate to admit it, but it hits home...secret wishes. Thanks for entering.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Melanie Jane Boicourt Shanks
Melanie Jane Boicourt Shanks

Fort Wayne, IN



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I have been writing since I knew how. Before that I would just draw pictures to tell a story. My true passion is poetic lyrics. That is mostly what I am inspired to write. I have been dabbling in othe.. more..

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