Time Peace

Time Peace

A Poem by Melanie Jane Boicourt Shanks

People go through life

lost in the shuffle of time,

finding peace in death.

 

 

 

© 2008 Melanie Jane Boicourt Shanks


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I'm not familiar at all with this genre. I just found it short and powerful. Rain..

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

For some... who let the cares of this life...overtake their sleep...thoughts ....self-control...
and dictate their happiness....who do not understand peace....


" as a man thinks in his heart...so is he " ~ Matthew 6:21

beautifully written...
I am blessed to have peace now...and I'll have it later too :)


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hmmm.... I think that there are those that would see life this way. I feel that there are others that would see that time is the evil and will try to live each day as full as possible! :) I guess i'm one of them.
I guess death is either viewed as a blessing or it's viewed as a question of uncertainty. I don't fear death. but i shall hold it off as long as possible.
Good poem, it's a thinker!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 10, 2008
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Melanie Jane Boicourt Shanks
Melanie Jane Boicourt Shanks

Fort Wayne, IN



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I have been writing since I knew how. Before that I would just draw pictures to tell a story. My true passion is poetic lyrics. That is mostly what I am inspired to write. I have been dabbling in othe.. more..

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