Concentrate

Concentrate

A Poem by Melanie Jane Boicourt Shanks
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Random word pointed to in book.

"

intense focus

no distractions

....

Sorry but I will have to finish this later.

I am being pulled away to something else.

....

O.K.

I am back.

I really did get pulled away.

I came back and I already had a review.

She even said she liked it.

I guess because it was

true to life.

© 2008 Melanie Jane Boicourt Shanks


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Clever, and she even said she liked it
so 'true to life', clever style here
good reading you so far
J.P.O.et

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That was so cool! Like being abducted by aliens And then returned to the moment that you left! :)
Really cool write!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is neat...Short and sweet, very ironic and to the point. You're pretty creative...I like that.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Melanie Jane Boicourt Shanks
Melanie Jane Boicourt Shanks

Fort Wayne, IN



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I have been writing since I knew how. Before that I would just draw pictures to tell a story. My true passion is poetic lyrics. That is mostly what I am inspired to write. I have been dabbling in othe.. more..

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