A Poem by Mel Jayne

He is chaos.

He is chaos.
It's in the way that he moves,
The way that he breathes.

He is Life,
Full of colour and song.
He can change
In a breath.

He is happiness 
And a storm.
And he is the best
And the most dangerous.

Because just seeing him
Once, at a glance,
Might change your life. 

© 2017 Mel Jayne

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sounds like a hamster I used to own! On a serious note this is a decent piece of writing.

Posted 11 Months Ago

Mel Jayne

10 Months Ago

Thanks a lot hahaha
Fascinating, this is a very nice piece. I like how you started it off with "He is chaos," that's a very good start. It could have been longer, but overall very good job.

Posted 1 Year Ago

0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mel Jayne

1 Year Ago

Thanks. I'm just focussing on getting loads of writing out there and then going back over and refini.. read more

1 Year Ago

That's cool. I'm looking forward to it.
Very well described... I really enjoyed reading and liked the way you wrote it! :)

Posted 1 Year Ago

Mel Jayne

1 Year Ago

Thank you! I'm glad you liked my style

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Added on April 19, 2017
Last Updated on April 19, 2017
Tags: man, mystery, poem, poetry, love, doctor who, feelings, drama


Mel Jayne
Mel Jayne

United Kingdom

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