He.

He.

A Poem by Mel Jayne
"

He is chaos.

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He is chaos.
It's in the way that he moves,
The way that he breathes.

He is Life,
Full of colour and song.
He can change
In a breath.

He is happiness 
And a storm.
And he is the best
And the most dangerous.

Because just seeing him
Once, at a glance,
Might change your life. 

© 2017 Mel Jayne



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sounds like a hamster I used to own! On a serious note this is a decent piece of writing.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Mel Jayne

4 Months Ago

Thanks a lot hahaha
Fascinating, this is a very nice piece. I like how you started it off with "He is chaos," that's a very good start. It could have been longer, but overall very good job.

Posted 6 Months Ago


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Mel Jayne

6 Months Ago

Thanks. I'm just focussing on getting loads of writing out there and then going back over and refini.. read more
Cœur

6 Months Ago

That's cool. I'm looking forward to it.
Very well described... I really enjoyed reading and liked the way you wrote it! :)


Posted 6 Months Ago


Mel Jayne

6 Months Ago

Thank you! I'm glad you liked my style

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Added on April 19, 2017
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Tags: man, mystery, poem, poetry, love, doctor who, feelings, drama

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Mel Jayne
Mel Jayne

United Kingdom



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