tea

tea

A Poem by Mel Jayne
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Inspired by Harry Potter books and such. This is dedicated to Lavender Brown and Parvati Pavvil.

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They sat together, bent and hushed.
They lay together, lovingly and sweet.
They didn't have many friends,
They liked tea and mysteries.

Their school friends liked to think of them,
Always as a pair. And all pairs had once been
a whole thing, destined to be.
But if one of them thought that
It was a bad idea, what would they do?

Pretty ribbons and tea leaves.
Sunsets and old books.
Magic and girls and lessons with friends.
It was a life, together.
Like they had dreamed.

© 2017 Mel Jayne



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A positive poem with a beautiful ending!
I really enjoyed this as it was different on Harry Potter and it's characters and engaging!
The harry potter series was and will always be my fav series ever! :D
Well done, keep it up!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Mel Jayne

11 Months Ago

Thank you so much!
Mr.Writer

11 Months Ago

No problem :))
I loved it! It's really good, I think I have reviewed your other poem before too. Well, you keep surprising me with your talent. Keep writing!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Mel Jayne

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much!
Anjali

1 Year Ago

You are very welcome!
I love this poem keep writing

Posted 1 Year Ago


Mel Jayne

1 Year Ago

Thank you, I will!
oh that sharing---there is an intimacy even when there is not----it's just a different kind of closeness.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Such an intricate and delicately balanced relationship, so well-expressed. The lovers like threads intertwined. The poet has great insight and beckons us into their private world for a little while. Love the rhythm and flow of this poem. Beautiful!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Mel Jayne

1 Year Ago

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.
Very sweet and lovely. I do like tea and mysteries too. Thank you for sharing...:)..................

Posted 1 Year Ago


Mel Jayne

1 Year Ago

you are very welcome, thank you for reviewing!
Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

My pleasure...::::))))
A pleasant poem, Mel!
Enjoyed it thoroughly..........

Posted 1 Year Ago


Mel Jayne

1 Year Ago

Thank you!
Inspired from.Harry Potter books😎..woww..
I'm a huge potterhead
And i loved this..i like all the characters in Harry Potter books and movies but my favourites are Harry,Draco and Hermione. Good job.

Posted 1 Year Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mel Jayne

1 Year Ago

I'm glad I could please a fan haha. I like draco too.
This poem is really lovely.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Mel Jayne

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much.

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Tags: poetry, poem, girls, lesbians, gay, lgbt, england, love, feelings, magic, fantasy, fiction, harry potter, destiny

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Mel Jayne
Mel Jayne

United Kingdom



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