tea

Inspired by Harry Potter books and such. This is dedicated to Lavender Brown and Parvati Pavvil.

They sat together, bent and hushed.

They lay together, lovingly and sweet.

They didn't have many friends,

They liked tea and mysteries.

Their school friends liked to think of them,

Always as a pair. And all pairs had once been

a whole thing, destined to be.

But if one of them thought that

It was a bad idea, what would they do?

Pretty ribbons and tea leaves.

Sunsets and old books.

Magic and girls and lessons with friends.

It was a life, together.

Like they had dreamed.

Reviews

[Mr.Writer]

A positive poem with a beautiful ending!
I really enjoyed this as it was different on Harry Potter and it's characters and engaging!
The harry potter series was and will always be my fav series ever! :D
Well done, keep it up!

[Mel Jayne]

Thank you so much!

[Mr.Writer]

No problem :))

[Anjali]

I loved it! It's really good, I think I have reviewed your other poem before too. Well, you keep surprising me with your talent. Keep writing!

[Mel Jayne]

Thank you so much!

[Anjali]

You are very welcome!

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

I love this poem keep writing

[Mel Jayne]

Thank you, I will!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

oh that sharing---there is an intimacy even when there is not----it's just a different kind of closeness.

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Such an intricate and delicately balanced relationship, so well-expressed. The lovers like threads intertwined. The poet has great insight and beckons us into their private world for a little while. Love the rhythm and flow of this poem. Beautiful!

[Mel Jayne]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

[Sami Khalil]

Very sweet and lovely. I do like tea and mysteries too. Thank you for sharing...:)..................

[Mel Jayne]

you are very welcome, thank you for reviewing!

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...::::))))

[Zephyr]

A pleasant poem, Mel!
Enjoyed it thoroughly..........

[Mel Jayne]

Thank you!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Inspired from.Harry Potter books😎..woww..
I'm a huge potterhead
And i loved this..i like all the characters in Harry Potter books and movies but my favourites are Harry,Draco and Hermione. Good job.

[Mel Jayne]

I'm glad I could please a fan haha. I like draco too.

[Jesus0996]

This poem is really lovely.

[Mel Jayne]

Thank you so much.