Cursed Love

Cursed Love

A Poem by Hopelessly Confused
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A boys feelings for a girl.

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I'm cursed by her
This beautiful killer
She's conquered my mind
And has started killing me from the inside.

When she screams,
My throat aches.
When she cries,
My eyes water.
When she hurts,
My pain is unbearable.

I can't stand
This unmerciful control she has over me.
Does she even realize,
the power she wields?
She's destroying me
Yet in my pain I have fallen for her.

I love her
Her beauty keeps me just inches away from the darkness.
I would surely die for her
But what she really needs
Is me to live for her.


© 2009 Hopelessly Confused



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A wonderful poem. 'I would surely die for her, but what she really needs, is me to live for her', this speaks millions in just a few small words. It sounds what you have is worth holding on to. The second stanza also confirms this, love like this is rare. Thanks for sharing and allowing me to reminise.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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youre poem screams of emotion, and it's absolutely beautiful.

Posted 1 Month Ago


omg.... you write the way I feel about my boy....
hes so far away and yet I still feel his pain I love this

Posted 2 Months Ago


Beautiful poem!
The second stanza is so catchy. The poem has articulated strong emotions so easily.
Keep writing!

Posted 6 Months Ago


"She's destroying me
Yet in my pain I have fallen for her"
These lines are truly beautiful. Great read

Posted 6 Months Ago


Feeling someone else's pain. I love the darkness this poem encompasses, how beautiful and terrifying it is to feel someone else's pain. To love someone can often mean to be their anchor, hurt for them or even bleed for them. Of course, that is not all they need. It is hard to love someone without feeling their emotions. Is it even possible?

Posted 8 Months Ago


This is definitely my favorite part.

"I can't stand
This unmerciful control she has over me.
Does she even realize,
the power she wields?
She's destroying me
Yet in my pain I have fallen for her."

The power some people have over us is truly incredible. We may or may not realize it. However, they might be in the same boat. Some people do not realize the impact they have over others until the time is too late. This is well written. Good job!

Posted 12 Months Ago


This is very sad yet beautiful.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Beautiful- absolutely amazing. I loved that last paragraph. I'm not ashamed to admit I wiped away a tear from my eye while reading this. Perfect!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Awesome poem! I'm nearly crying it's so sad and perfect.

Posted 2 Years Ago


This is beautiful!!!

I would surely die for her
But what she really needs
Is me to live for her.

^^ I love these lines!! :)))

This is wonderfully done Melana!

Posted 2 Years Ago



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Added on December 27, 2009
Last Updated on December 27, 2009
Tags: Dark, Fantasy, Hope, Life, Love, Pain, Sad, Thoughts, Abuse, Passion

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Hopelessly Confused
Hopelessly Confused

Tallahassee, U.S. Virgin Islands



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I'm Melana, I love to write. It helps me keep sane. Can't go a day with out writing. Most my friends love to write so it's awesome. I love Reading- Mainly supernatural books, Writing- Anything just.. more..

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