Cursed Love

Cursed Love

A Poem by Hopelessly Confused
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A boys feelings for a girl.

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I'm cursed by her
This beautiful killer
She's conquered my mind
And has started killing me from the inside.

When she screams,
My throat aches.
When she cries,
My eyes water.
When she hurts,
My pain is unbearable.

I can't stand
This unmerciful control she has over me.
Does she even realize,
the power she wields?
She's destroying me
Yet in my pain I have fallen for her.

I love her
Her beauty keeps me just inches away from the darkness.
I would surely die for her
But what she really needs
Is me to live for her.


© 2009 Hopelessly Confused



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A wonderful poem. 'I would surely die for her, but what she really needs, is me to live for her', this speaks millions in just a few small words. It sounds what you have is worth holding on to. The second stanza also confirms this, love like this is rare. Thanks for sharing and allowing me to reminise.

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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The feelings you've incorporated/implemented into this is amazing, and the whole thing speaks out to me if I'm quite honest. The bit that gets me is 'does she even realise,/ the power she wields?' Great lines. Its also quite true for a vast number of boys, especially those whom one would not expect to have such feelings for a girl.

Beautiful writing!

Posted 4 Years Ago


sad write but as well as moving if that makes sense.
very nicely expressed and written out!

Posted 4 Years Ago


I truly love this piece! It is so good!

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Posted 5 Years Ago


A truly beautiful moving peom.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Beautiful, strong emotions and love almost intertwines in the powerful poem....
I love the line which says....''I can't stand
This unmerciful control she has over me.''


Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"When she screams,
My throat aches.
When she cries,
My eyes water.
When she hurts,
My pain is unbearable."

I think these lines are the best in the poem, they're the most powerful. I do like this a lot.


Posted 5 Years Ago


This is one of the most powerful poem i have read in awhile . The great thing about it is it can apply to anyones relationship with a girl from father to daughter , to husband to wife . !! :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


What powerful emotion lies in this piece.A poem of devotion and love, great read.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

An exellent representation of utter infatuation for another. What really impressed me is your use of language to suggest both a literal and non-literal meaning. You've captured a common sense of emotion in this peice, well done

Posted 5 Years Ago



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Added on December 27, 2009
Last Updated on December 27, 2009
Tags: Dark, Fantasy, Hope, Life, Love, Pain, Sad, Thoughts, Abuse, Passion

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Hopelessly Confused
Hopelessly Confused

Tallahassee, U.S. Virgin Islands



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