Cursed Love

Cursed Love

A Poem by Hopelessly Confused
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A boys feelings for a girl.

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I'm cursed by her
This beautiful killer
She's conquered my mind
And has started killing me from the inside.

When she screams,
My throat aches.
When she cries,
My eyes water.
When she hurts,
My pain is unbearable.

I can't stand
This unmerciful control she has over me.
Does she even realize,
the power she wields?
She's destroying me
Yet in my pain I have fallen for her.

I love her
Her beauty keeps me just inches away from the darkness.
I would surely die for her
But what she really needs
Is me to live for her.


© 2009 Hopelessly Confused



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A wonderful poem. 'I would surely die for her, but what she really needs, is me to live for her', this speaks millions in just a few small words. It sounds what you have is worth holding on to. The second stanza also confirms this, love like this is rare. Thanks for sharing and allowing me to reminise.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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A wonderful poem. 'I would surely die for her, but what she really needs, is me to live for her', this speaks millions in just a few small words. It sounds what you have is worth holding on to. The second stanza also confirms this, love like this is rare. Thanks for sharing and allowing me to reminise.

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

A good poem with a sound message of the depths of love and the power found within it

Posted 7 Years Ago


true!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Powerful n' pure n' painfully honest! The end lines turn n' twist the whole thing around so that what's dark becomes light....FANTASTIC! ㋡

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

so sad =(

Posted 7 Years Ago


It's scary how well I can relate to this poem man, this is exactly what I needed to read today haha thank you!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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cool, cool, this is a powerful poem dude...... lol (its also kinda EMO) but rating 100 ^-^

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mmmm, i love this piece. Love that last line, it's quiet but fantastic. An interesting paradox you pose with pain and love, complete opposites but usually there always inextricably intertwined. Beautiful.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved the flow and structure of this poem, excellent write!

- S.T.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful imagy. i thoroughly enjoyed it

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Added on December 27, 2009
Last Updated on December 27, 2009
Tags: Dark, Fantasy, Hope, Life, Love, Pain, Sad, Thoughts, Abuse, Passion

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Hopelessly Confused
Hopelessly Confused

Tallahassee, U.S. Virgin Islands



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I'm Melana, I love to write. It helps me keep sane. Can't go a day with out writing. Most my friends love to write so it's awesome. I love Reading- Mainly supernatural books, Writing- Anything just.. more..

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