Harmony at Twilight

Fragile pitter-patter, pitter-patter

of the rain

falling gently, ever-softly

on the window pane

 

Quiet tap, tap, tap

of the branches swaying

the whispering silhouette

of a woman praying

 

Noisy drip, drop, drip

of a faucet leak

silent scurry of a mouse

a tiny squeak

 

Dragging bang, dragging bang

of a shutter loose

lonely honk, invisible honk

of a wandering goose

 

Breathless sigh, moving eye

of the sound asleep

lowkey growl, echoed howl

from the forest deep

 

Creaking stretch, stretching creak

of a settling floor

rattle stop, rattle stop

of a wind shook door

 

Fragile pitter-patter, pitter-patter

of the rain

falling gently, ever-softly

on the window pane

 

 

 

Reviews

[Flow~]

This reminds me of a sleepless night all the sounds that seem to catch my attention. It is very descriptive like I was reading the start of a novel. Good Write~

[Cherrie Palmer]

i wish i was reading tis on a cloudy rain filled day
it was wonderful

[Rhine Wolf]

Oh now that was nice. At one point i thought that you where going to increase the intercity of the poem, make it get angry but you did not and it was a nice change to read a poem with no anger in it.

Blessed be, Fallon

[Tina Kline]

What a great poem! I like the way you made the words as sounds.
It read really well, had a nice rhytmn to it!

tina

[LisetteCanWrite!]

This is a great writing.. I really like the style and how you placed everything together.. you have some talent here.. and use your wording carefully which I like to see in this type of writing!!! Thank you and I look forward to seeing more pieces by you .. especially like this one!