Just a Dream

Desire twinkled in his eyes

laughter on his tongue

Emotion he did never hide

when it came to fun

 

Loving flowed from fingertips

whispers in her ear

Gentle kisses on her lips

chased away her every fear

 

In his arms he held her tight

and slowly stroked her hair

All throughout the starry night

he was with her there

 

At morning light the truth was shown

and tears in her eyes did gleam

If only she would have known

that it was just a dream

Reviews

[Flow~]

Well if the dream is that good why cry I would enjoy having dreams like this :) Sweetly done and nice work as always~

[The future is now...]

That was beautiful. That was sort of like mine, but better! lol...not really in the poetic mood lately. Just feel like writing feelings. I loved this though. Great Job!!!

[Saosinkid (Death whispe..]

this is so beautiful
i dont know why this hasnt got any reviews
its really good
you are for sure gonna be a finnalist in my contest :)