I Love Him

Confusion seeps into my brain

am I listening?

Tears fall like gentle rain

but I love him

 

My heart pounds with nervousness

and body quivers

in my dreams a soft caress

and I love him

 

Days pass, months go by

I get lonely

I feel as if I'll surely die

still, I love him

 

Embraces in the dead of night

loving kisses

home again, everything alright

forever, I'll love him

Reviews

[Anya]

I'll have to stop here to make your work last me.

Yet another sensational poem. It's so beautiful it makes me want to cry. :)

[Buni]

lovely!

[Flow~]

I feel every man deep down would want someone to love him like this. it is the beauty of woman that brings man down to his knees. Lovely write.

[Anastasia Starlena]

beautiful piece. Very well written with a soft subtle passion. exquisite.