I cry for him

I cry for him

A Poem by Melissa Kesead

I watch him stand

a face in the crowd

and I cry for him

 

He's known to no one

loved by no one

utterly alone

 

I see his eyes

they're full of tears

cloudy and dim

 

His body shivers

from the cold

skin and bones

 

The street's his home

a child alone

I cry for him

 

© 2009 Melissa Kesead


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A beautiful and sad poem . It strikes at the
soul of mankind.

Each of us is perhaps only steps away from the
condition of which you write. It makes us stop
and think----what if ?

This is perhaps the story of a child, observed, which
makes it even more pitiful.

I think you are a gifted writer. You have touched each
of your readers in a special way, in that tender place.

I will be reading more of you soon.

------ Eagle Cruagh

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Beautifully said!
Sad but amazingly written

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ouch very harsh
great write

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A beautiful and sad poem . It strikes at the
soul of mankind.

Each of us is perhaps only steps away from the
condition of which you write. It makes us stop
and think----what if ?

This is perhaps the story of a child, observed, which
makes it even more pitiful.

I think you are a gifted writer. You have touched each
of your readers in a special way, in that tender place.

I will be reading more of you soon.

------ Eagle Cruagh

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I mite some like a totally nerd and maybe you won't know what I'm referencing this to but I'm going to do it anyways...This poem reminds me of naruto and hinata's relationship in every way. Very Well Written.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

How often do people see this and just walk by pretending not to see. It is the funny thing about America we are truly blind to the sadness around us. very heartfelt write.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This made my eyes water a little.. well conveyed message..

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Melissa Kesead
Melissa Kesead

Key West, FL



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I am a wife and mother of two young children who give me ideas for books constantly. I live in Key West, Florida and when I'm not writing I enjoy fishing, lobstering and being on the water whenever p.. more..

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