Amnesia

This is a poem i have written about people who you love and thought y'all had a future together, but the memories you two made they act as if they never existed.

Do you remember me

I remember you

You told me you loved me

Promises felt so true

I fell for you

Hoping you fell for me too

Skipped classes to see you

But my heart skipped a beat thinking about you

Falling in love is a bet

But with you dreams weren't met

Lost in the night

Something wasn't right

Signs of affection

Your "love" was an infection

Attention you wanted for your collection

Planted your roots in my garden

You swear you don't remember

Pain lived on till December

As my fragile heart harden

Broken memories remain

I'm so stupid, it's inane

You chewed me out

Now I'm always in doubt

My hear full of cotton

Memories we made but you swear you've forgotten

Young and dumb

Should've guarded my heart

That would've been smart

You forgetting scum

You had a case of amnesia

But pain is my specialty

And I'm no anesthesia

Author's Note

This is my second favorite poem I written for my book. I would love to know your opinions on it. Please and thank you.

Reviews

[Desiree Stem]

I love it!! It's very well-written and composed. I feel like you should either put periods and/or a space between where you change subjects, other than that, bravo!! The content is beautiful! :)

[Romello Simmons]

Thank you so much and thank you for the advice