The Vibrant To My Dull

:) For some odd reason, I get romancy stuff all the time as of late. But oh well! This piece deserves at least a little bit of pride and dignity. Lol. Please read and enjoy!

There are tons of things I want in this world,

one of them is you.

There are tons of things I expect from this world,

one of them isn't you.

 

If you were to give me a genie with only one wish,

I'd wish for you.

If you were to give me a genie with three wishes,

I'd wish for you to be mine, for you to love me, and more you to spend my life with me.

 

From everything that I want in this world,

my number one is you.

You turned my world upside down,

signed the word love,

and then broke the ride.

From everything I could possibly hope and love in this world,

I hope and love for you.

 

You are the one person that above all else,

makes me feel special.

You are the one person above everyone else,

that I can actually love without breaking any rules of any kind.

You are the one person above all galaxies,

that I can call the...

the shine to my sun,

the moon to my night sky,

the north star to a lost adventurer,

the water to the water buffalos,

the constellations that make astrology,

the color to my world,

and above all else....You the the other half of my heart.

 

You are ...

You are...

You are...

The vibrant to my dull.

 

 

 

Author's Note

Just sort of wrote. I truthfully just wrote, don't know where from though...

Reviews

[icerhex]

Even though the rhythm isn't consistant with each section, it still remains intact and it flows well. A poem that is very relatable and your use of words is good. I enjoyed readingg it and it was well written.

[Melody]

:) Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.

[Fréyjä Helv..]

Honesty put down in words... Lacking emotion, that would make it less more cliche. Don't you think? Had fun reading it though...

[Melody]

Hmm...Maybe. I don't know. I usually don't like giving myself criticism on my own work. Lol.
I'm glad you had fun reading it, though. I appreciate you reading it. :)

[ewest1220]

It feels almost Jazzy for some reason. I agree with Insamity it was very well expressed.

[Melody]

Lol. Thank you.

[ewest1220]

I enjoyed reading it too, keep it up :D

[Melody]

I plan to! :)

[Sam Gregory]

hmmm, expressed well although I feel it was a little cliche in parts. The message is there though, pretty good. keep it up :)

[Melody]

Thank you. And Sam, I'm Melody, I'm pretty cliche anyway. Lol

[Sam Gregory]

Haha lol