Cry of Goodbye

Cry of Goodbye

A Poem by Melody
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Edited old piece. Please read. :)

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As tragic as it is...
A goodbye is bound to always arrive
because whatever goes up always comes down
like when a tear produces and fades from the face
until it drops and stains the surface.

It's a story when it begins
and transitions to a romance at the end.
People have hearts and they bleed till they burst
but if it didn't, true love wouldn't exist.
And I think if you're human then you know
that the most painful tear to cry,
is a cry of goodbye.

© 2013 Melody


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Melody
I edited an old piece. This was the result. Tell me what you think please.

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i like how you put some very good emotion into this poem.not to ask anything to personal but have you ever experienced this or know someone who did.this poem gives off a very wise and true feeling when i read it.we all experience this in different ways either it be from moving away to the loss of someone close to us.Overall this poem is amazing as you used both very good dictation and giving us something we have not realized since some people have not said goodbye yet and they should cherish every moment they have with the person who might have to say goodbye.


Posted 9 Years Ago


Melody

9 Years Ago

I haven't. I like to observe people, reading, and having little theatrical plays in my head, so find.. read more
A wise thought. A very wise thought.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Melody

11 Years Ago

Thank you

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