It's Not The God, It's Us

It's Not The God, It's Us

A Story by Meshalini
"

We are the real criminals, not God.

"
"Why is this happening?"
"Why the God wants to destroy this planet by creating more wars and crimes?"
I often ask this question to everyone
but I didn't  get the answer.
But on one night, everything changed.
I looked up the sky
and I saw the moon and the stars.
Suddenly,I felt like I was travelling in the speed of light into space
and all of a sudden, I'm in the moon.
I turned around and saw my home, it was so big,
as well as the things that are happening there.
I was shocked and cried a lot.
Immediately, something came into my mind,
It was a matter that my mom told me,
"If we want an answer for a question, we must think outside the box 
and do not blame anyone until we get it".
At that time, I understood one thing, I was wrong.
I was thinking in the box all this while,
like a cat looking for her kittens inside the cage 
without realizing that they were actually outside the cage.
When I returned to earth, I ran to my mom and said
"I found the answer for my question"
She asked me "What is it, dear?"
And I said "It's not the God who wants to destroy this world, it's us, humans".

© 2019 Meshalini


Author's Note

Meshalini
A little imagination of mine....Enjoy...

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Do we need to get an answer for simple things, people just cant follow what is good, or just bluntly break the rules, and show synpathy as if we concern fro people's life, not letting them to die. You know best thing to teach people is how to lead atleast their life, so that it just passes to everyone else.
"Look thyself and help thee".

Posted 7 Years Ago


So true and full of wisdom.
It is humans who have harmed Earth because of our greed and lust for power.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Meshalini

7 Years Ago

Yes, it's true....thank you so much..
marvelous poem akka.... its true! God has created everything but it is in our hands to destroy or maintain ^_^

Posted 7 Years Ago


Ardra Nair

7 Years Ago

yes akka... i didnt visit... because of that, i have only 3 points! and i didnt write anything also!.. read more
Meshalini

7 Years Ago

Ayiooo...okay..
Ardra Nair

7 Years Ago

:) :) :) :) :)
I love this. We need to take responsibility for our own actions. If we want things to be a certain way, we have to do it ourselves.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Meshalini

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much...
"....At that time, I understood one thing, I was wrong.
Until that time I was looking inside of the box,
Like a cat looking for her kittens inside of the cage
without thinking to look outside of the cage...."
Very true. We are always looking for someone yo blame for our own faults. But the truth is, the fault is ours. Very nice piece.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Meshalini

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your wonderful words...
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mou
you've portrayed the strong truth with such a beautiful imagination.yes I am totally agree with you here.humanity is the savior of the world.


Posted 7 Years Ago


Meshalini

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much mou...
mou

7 Years Ago

you're most welcome :)
I have been blessed to live a life which has allowed me time to ponder all things. This story is very relatable to the many times I have made such realizations.



Posted 7 Years Ago


Meshalini

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much
it is us, if we could stop for a second and see that we are all the same that we are all brothers and sisters, we are all a family, them maybe just maybe we could make a little difference
stop fighting stop destroying our land we only have one earth stop the war and learn to share it
it is either all of us or no one at all

Posted 7 Years Ago


Meshalini

7 Years Ago

Yes that's absolutely right..... Thank you so much
Realistic and imaginative at the same time. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Meshalini

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much
The mother is correct.
"When I returned to earth, I ran to my mom and said
"I found the answer for my question."
She asked me "What is it, dear?"
And I said "It's not the God who want to destroy this world, it's us, humans."
The above lines are true. Men need to control all things will lead to bad ending for the human life. Thank you Meshalini for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote




Posted 7 Years Ago


Meshalini

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much Coyote...
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

You are welcome Meshalina.

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Added on August 20, 2016
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