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Love or Hate?

Love or Hate?

A Poem by Neeeks!

We are born with a choice,

To love one and hate one.

You are the one I chose to love,

But you broke my heart.

That day I saw you there with her.

Holding her, telling her she was the only one for you,

The perfect one.

I was left with all this pain,

And you became the one I hate.

All I wanted was to show you I care,

To be your friend,

To be your everything.

And now I ask you,

Why did you bring me all this pain?


© 2010 Neeeks!



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Adversity is my greatest gift. If not for yesterday there would be no today. I would have to thank the ones who have hurt me the most, for their gifts have been my evolution

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is very good. Very clear and concise, just like we all feel. Wonderful!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Old music. Love and hate. A heart beat apart. Life seem to be unfair in love. Hate make things level out somehow. Poem is very good. A lot of disappointment. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Neeeks!
Neeeks!

Pine Ridge, SD



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Hello, the name's Echo, but my friends refer to me as Neeeks, Echo-Neko, Echo-chan, Neko or Neko-chan... You get the point. I'm twenty-one, a vegetarian and have been writing for almost nine year.. more..

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