What If? -Verse One-

What If? -Verse One-

A Poem by Neeeks!

What if you talked to me,

I might answer you.

 

What if you called me first,

I could say you cared.
 
What if you gave me a hug,
I would do the same to you.
 
Why must I do them first?

© 2010 Neeeks!



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Yes I sometimes think why must I say to someone "I love you", why even though they're waiting for it can't they say it first. If they could I would have more strength to protect out bonds, but If I choose to do so it more like me trying to keep they by my side, I don't want to do that.

Yes we are similar in many way, would you like to chat about anime sometime, indepth like reviewing someone's work

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Really lovely writing!
Keep it up!
Do you read mine too Anguish and She...
God bless you...
Lucky!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow..this is awesome! I love it. No one likes to initiate

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful. Full of emotion that is condensed in to a short verse. As a poet, that is much more enjoyable to read, at least for me. Keep it up.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yes I sometimes think why must I say to someone "I love you", why even though they're waiting for it can't they say it first. If they could I would have more strength to protect out bonds, but If I choose to do so it more like me trying to keep they by my side, I don't want to do that.

Yes we are similar in many way, would you like to chat about anime sometime, indepth like reviewing someone's work

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well someone has to. The type of person who goes first is the kind who normally goes through life without the burden of, no regrets. How much love is never known, for the lack of a little courage? Be the first. Magic usually happens, with one simple smile.

Very nice Neeeks!
Antonio


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

because only you know what you really want from life.......smile......short yet leaves one to wonder......good technique

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A sweet and kind poem. I believe we need to walk slow and easy into friendship and relationship. Always test the person. A lot of story tellers and abusers. I like the feel of hope and possibility. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Neeeks!
Neeeks!

Pine Ridge, SD



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Hello, the name's Echo, but my friends refer to me as Neeeks, Echo-Neko, Echo-chan, Neko or Neko-chan... You get the point. I'm twenty-one, a vegetarian and have been writing for almost nine year.. more..

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