What If? -Verse Two-

What If? -Verse Two-

A Poem by Neeeks!

What if the stars stopped shining,

I might stop shining too.

 
What if the sun stopped rising,
I could take the blame.
 
What if the moon disappeared,
I would go away.
 
Would you try to find me?

© 2010 Neeeks!



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This is surprisingly :) nice for me loved it thanks for sharing

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very interesting thought , the what if's we can never really know ...but poetry helps to ponder

Posted 7 Years Ago


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A very good poem. We all want to be found and treated with kindness and love. I like the feel and the movement of the poem. You wrote a complete story in so few words. That takes a lot of talent. A excellent poem.
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Posted 7 Years Ago


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Neeeks!
Neeeks!

Pine Ridge, SD



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Hello, the name's Echo, but my friends refer to me as Neeeks, Echo-Neko, Echo-chan, Neko or Neko-chan... You get the point. I'm twenty-one, a vegetarian and have been writing for almost nine year.. more..

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