Code's

Code's

A Poem by Metaphantom
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this is just what came out of me, without structural patterns are still found within it, as it is about CODES.

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Spiraling ring spinning time diminishing

Lines no longer parallel to rhymes of anything

Cubic, symbols, circular 9 coded minds think

Brink of existence questioning

Lessons spring, we find things define dreams

That rewind beings spiritually drink mescaline

Code's

 


Link to the patterns of the archives of Egypt

Our sides demons their sides rides are scenic

Trip, anemic like a vampire need blood now

By the campfire the love is in the pulse

Isn’t it of course they need it irrevocably cursed

Disperse insert intravenous genius circuitry how?

Code's

 


Feeding on the ghosts tonight holy freight

Take flight the poltergeist souls sold it twice

Spectacular erect direct passengers that way

With tact they act like its normal enslaving

Matter fact I don’t feel we evolved from the cavemen

Shot through black holes in galaxies and we came in

Code's


© 2017 Metaphantom



Author's Note

Metaphantom
non structural CODES

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After reading a few of your writes, I am left with the impression that there is an immense amount of energy within you. It's like your intelligence is about to combust, and it finds release in the music of a rainfall of words. There is a natural cadence, a musicality that is a chorus behind your words.

It's easy to fall into the rhythm of your words. At the same time, there is a profound sense that you have something important to say, which requires a more in depth study of the lines written.

The classical influences are apparent but there are deeper depths beneath the surface.

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People have always mentioned this along these lines, not so eloquent as I am pleased to know an empa.. read more
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I am a Pisces and quite intuitive by nature. It has actually been scary at times.
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"Matter fact I don’t feel we evolved from the cavemen", blessed it with this one. Fluid, flowing, symphonic,rhythmic.

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I'm going to give this a few more reads. I seem to be missing something.
That, and the font looks strange on my phone. Lol

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*Welcome to "Pure Rhymes" Thanks for joining, great to have you...!*

What can I say... My code accepts this as beast-mode verse... The different structure of syllabic slant shows a good handle on technique... A black hole of thought...

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Metaphantom

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Absolutely proud to be a part of something fantastical! I am very grateful you of all people read th.. read more
Silente

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It shows, and I am so proud to have you...! Keep waxing on, because this is gold...
After reading a few of your writes, I am left with the impression that there is an immense amount of energy within you. It's like your intelligence is about to combust, and it finds release in the music of a rainfall of words. There is a natural cadence, a musicality that is a chorus behind your words.

It's easy to fall into the rhythm of your words. At the same time, there is a profound sense that you have something important to say, which requires a more in depth study of the lines written.

The classical influences are apparent but there are deeper depths beneath the surface.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Metaphantom

2 Weeks Ago

People have always mentioned this along these lines, not so eloquent as I am pleased to know an empa.. read more
Linda Marie Van Tassell

2 Weeks Ago

I am a Pisces and quite intuitive by nature. It has actually been scary at times.
Metaphantom

2 Weeks Ago

it can be a gift and a curse being intuitive, so much that you scare yourself, I feel and believe ov.. read more

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Added on November 3, 2017
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Metaphantom
Metaphantom

Olympia, WA



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Just a freelance writer, I came from a background of hip-hop and poetry in its finest. Reading poetry from some of the greats John Keats. Many others, Charles Bukowski - so many, and the greatest mus.. more..

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