lol  my son....

lol my son....

A Poem by Andrea Mouser
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i was just writing

"
i love you
i truly do
but baby

please shush your mouth
sit down please
eat all your food

i love you
i truly do
but baby'

mommy has a headache
and mommy is exhausted
not to mention, cranky

i love you 
i truly do
but baby

because i said so
dont climb on there
please dont throw that glass!

i love you
i truly do
but baby

sit still
listen
behave

i love you
i truly do
but baby

whatever
go ahead
sure, why not


© 2014 Andrea Mouser



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Wonderful poem which had strong imagery attached. Very well written.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a sweet poem. I could picture every line. Brought a smile to my face.
Thanks for sharing.
:)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your poem reflects how so many of us feel nowadays!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Haha, I love this. It's witty and humorous, it made me smile. It's not always easy being a mother...actually it's never easy! Great job!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Andrea Mouser

3 Years Ago

dont i know it!

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Andrea Mouser
Andrea Mouser

Sacramento, CA



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If you review The Key, (currently editing). I will review one of yours. i dont accept read requests. but if you message me what you want me to read. i will read it. Im 22. I love animals. I enjoy.. more..

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