My Baby

My Baby

A Poem by Andrea Mouser

Never Before
Have i Seen something like this
these eyes
these hands
so small and warm
soft and gently
she is mine
i am hers
my little angel
with her rosey curls
i adore her
i love her
i shall drown her
with kisses 
from head to toe
surely God has never
made one as sweet as this
my baby girl


© 2014 Andrea Mouser



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A beautiful poem for the child. Children give us reason and purpose. Nice description brought to life and vision of woman and child. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The poem has good structure.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Ah yes, the love for a new baby. At my the birth of our first I realized that I had never known that I could love something so much :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Very nice and I liked the line "I shall drown her with kisses."

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hey Andrea! You are great at expression. Though being an unattached kind of guy I can't relate much to the poem. But the pretty soft sentiments much appreciated. Write on.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Babies are great...and fantastic when they are your own.
Nice clean writing. I felt the love.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a beautiful tribute nothing like a mothers love
and welcome aboard

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is very sweet.
Is this true....as in is this about your baby?
You may want to consider capitilizing "God."
It's your poem though.
Very nice!
~Claire in VA








Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Andrea Mouser

3 Years Ago

it was while i was pregnant. before i knew i was having a boy lol
but its an easy switch to a .. read more
A sweet write...Thank you for penning...:)............

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Andrea Mouser

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