ArcAngel

Early morning write...not much really.

 

 

 

 

Lucifer.

Evil's last stand...

God's only tear.

The fall from grace...

is far from great.

And the rest of us are having to pay.

     Beneath the underground,

Far down.

Were you will never be saved.

 

 The anguish of Eden,

with our impure thoughts.

The fleeting moments,

we can't take hold of.

While waiting for the Savior,

to seize the day.

Reviews

[Angelic Darkness]

I love this poem, and the picture that went along with it. This
is the most powerful line here: Evil's last stand...

God's only tear.

That is a amazing line, and it all worked well together. AD

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

Nice, short, and straight to the point. Like always, you never cease to amaze me. ^^ I absolutely love the many ways you described Satan/Lucifer. Short, yet excellent, detail! Awesome job!

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood

[Voltaire Mephisto (aka ..]

It leaves something to be desired. Needs more work. It's no Dante's Inferno. There wasn't enough detail, no elaboration. A poem about God and Satan should be deep and philisophical. I understand that this may be a work in progress, so I encourage you to rewrite it with a little spice.