Soldier

Soldier

A Poem by Michael Lopez
"

in the mud with thoughts.....

"

Life of a soldier.

Breathe orders,

forget reality.

Dreaming of faces,

to screaming faces.

 

With my faith crying out.

My fingers squeeze,

and I sleep at ease.

With all the faces,

beginning to haunt me.

 

© 2009 Michael Lopez


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I agree with Blade and blood on this. This is well expressed.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sounds like post-war Trauma. This is some serious stuff. Just imagine being out their hearing the screams and shrieks of lives lost... [creepy]

Nice work, Michael; this is really, super deep. :)

Ironically Yours.

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 19, 2009
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Michael Lopez

Houston, TX



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