Faded Colour'

just a dream...maybe even somthing more.

My mind races towards a dream,

I can never reach...

 

Your eyes sparkle,

like ocean water...

Dancing in feilds,

with the blooming flowers...

 

Autumns delight,

with colors fading and winter will soon be here.

 

Fires kindle,

Like your warm embrace.

An enchanting dream,

I hope not to be rid of...

 

 

Reviews

[Dakota]

Wow!

[*~Kristy~*]

Perfect title, perfect picture, perfect poem! I liked it, a lot! You seem to put little hints of the Autumn season in there everywhere and such. Awsome write!