Four Haikus

Four random haiku poems.

A field of flowers

My eyes find a butterfly

Lost in the moment

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Cherry trees in bloom

The transcendental beauty

A forest full of clouds

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Raindrops form a stream

A leaf is sailing away

My heart waves goodbye

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The midnight garden

Venus walks among the stars

A sky full of blooms

Reviews

[FIN]

Pure love; and essence in each haiku.

The first: A blissful daze
The second: Divinity/Majestical
The third: A gentle kiss of love (like a child's heart: purity)
The fourth: My home (;

Loved every last one of them; truly creative and highly skilled at writing haikus.

LR

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I like the first one best.
It captures a magical moment.

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

I can only wish that I had enough talent to write a structured poem. You make it seem so simple here. Beautifully mastered!

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Stunning Michael! Your haiku give a sense of serenity and calm. Your pen paints quite the scene my friend! Starz x

[Giulia King]

Beautiful Haikus! You truly have a gift :)

[Miss Sharon]

These are beautifully written Haiku! Love all of them. ~SP

[Voidwvlf]

I've always enjoyed well-written haikus, and these are some of the best in a long time. Perhaps my predilection for nighttime makes me biased, but I loved the simplicity and peace in the last one about the garden.

I genuinely have nothing to say other than well done. I hope to see more of these from you in the future!

[Pete]

ahhh - so relaxing. they are each so beautiful. each one drew me in and took me to different place of peace and tranquility where I could be one with nature and contemplate. well done.

[Michael X]

hey, thanks pete, I appreciate the kind thoughts!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

"A field of flowers
My eyes find a butterfly
Lost in the moment"
I loved this one!! You have captured the beauty of nature in a mesmerizing way.. Great work!

[Michael X]

Hi Yumna, thanks so much for the valuable thoughts!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You are welcome, Michael! My pleasure ☺