Forever Gone, But I Will Stop You

Forever Gone, But I Will Stop You

A Story by Hidden Eclipse
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I guess Fate was being kind today, because this just popped in my head. Enjoy.

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I will stop you.

No matter what it takes. I will. I will not give up, nor quit. I will fight. I will believe. I will hope. I will move on. I will finish what I started. I will win. I will make You disappear. I will make You fade away into the darkness of Justice. I will find You. I will make You pay. I will make You feel pain. I will have my revenge. I will avenge Her. I will destroy You. I will make You suffer, just like You did to Her. I will torture You, just like You tortured Her. I will punish You, just like when She was about to punish You. I will have my victory. I will make You lose, Crime. I will humiliate You. I will illuminate You. I will banish You. I will shed Light on Your vile murders, vile rapes, vile damages.

I won't stop. I will never stop. I will serve Justice and Order, just like You serve Crime and Anarchy.   

You may be Forever Gone, But I Will Stop You.

© 2012 Hidden Eclipse



Author's Note

Hidden Eclipse
It just came to me. I guess.

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A very angry and emotional write, but in a positive way. I hope it helped you get it out of your system.

Posted 1 Week Ago


YES! I love the short phrases, the strong impact behind your words. The way you make the statements straight out and cut right into it. Truly excellent :)

Posted 9 Months Ago


Hidden Eclipse

9 Months Ago

Thank you! :)
cool.. what i can say just cool..
like it :)

Posted 9 Months Ago


Hidden Eclipse

9 Months Ago

Thank you! :)

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Hidden Eclipse

Phoenix (The Land of Endured) , AZ



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