Creation

Creation

A Poem by MichelleClay

All uniquely special, most of us would agree

But there is just so much, that we simply do not see

Look past your fears, fights and fun

Now see who’s the insignificant one,

For just look at the moon, stars and the sun.


© 2011 MichelleClay



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Really there is just so much, that we simply do not see.
Lovely poem that focuses on science of astronomy.

Posted 5 Years Ago


we truly are insignificant in the big plan of things But perhaps a thought is larger than a universe

Posted 5 Years Ago


We all need to stop and reflect on life... our life in the moment and our life found within the vastness of all that sings around us. Thank you for the inspiration to pause when the world tries to push us on until we're numb and blind to beauty...

Posted 5 Years Ago


The spin on this that gets me, is it is a nice little Roll of the Reno Dice kind of prayer. And I like that.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Very succinct yet thought provoking and somewhat inspiring. Your adventurous spirit can be traced in every word. :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Wow. Amazing and inspirational piece. I really enjoyed this..

Posted 5 Years Ago


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YES! Its so important to keep things in perspective and to not take ourselves too seriously......we are all very small in relativeness arent we?

I agree with these thoughts very much.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Beautiful, you have touch this dreamers heart with the awe of nature.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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I love it , Nature is such an inspiration , Mighty forces of the world :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


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For such a brief poem, a lot was said with very few words. I am not sure how anyone cannot see the creation by design within our fragile world!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Bedfordshire, United Kingdom



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