Creation

Creation

A Poem by MichelleClay

All uniquely special, most of us would agree

But there is just so much, that we simply do not see

Look past your fears, fights and fun

Now see who’s the insignificant one,

For just look at the moon, stars and the sun.

© 2011 MichelleClay


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Really lovely writing! I like whole wording.
Keep it up!
Do you read mine too "Anguish and She"
God bless you!
Lucky!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simply beautiful!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice one
i loved this ..

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dear Clay, You have cleverly talked about the uniqueness of even insignificant things.Nothing is insignificant in this vast universe

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

short and powerful, nice!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Almost everyday I feel so insignificant. This is a good reflection of that emotion. I like it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful poem my friend.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful and so true! I felt every word!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

my sentiments precisely, very well spoken. excellent little write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ooo, this was cool :) Indeed, it definitely shows how things are truly even bigger than us. We're just a dot someplace, compared to the great vastness of everything else around us. Great piece! :)

M.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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MichelleClay
MichelleClay

Bedfordshire, United Kingdom



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