My secret

A private dedication . . .

He is the light you'll never see That shines beautifully within He can heal the wounds of war And relieve you of your sin He requires nothing, he needs no reward.  Angels that have fallen are not meant to be adored.  But he will always have my heart In this world and the next hell and heaven can't deny me  For it is my free will to give if only he knew,   he is the reason why I live.

Reviews

[Craig Froman]

What an eloquent, lifting dedication... one that shows from where your true beauty and inspiration flow from... May the world discover your secret and find release from their sin and the pain of horrid wars that rage... Living life abundantly is beyond compare, dear poet...

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Respect of the highest order!
Worshiped at the highest altar,
Fountain of life's living water!

[Bpoet]

That's a secret worth cherishing. Only share it though with other people who can relate to what your going through in life. :) Great job.

[MichelleClay]

Thank you :)

[The Cobra Lounge]

A testament to how strong your faith can be. To all we love, everything is meant to be.

[soliloquy]

So very nice to read this.....again.

[-----]

Straight and true like an unfettered arrow. Excellent write.

[out]

what a great dedication. heartfelt and wonderfully penned.

[*]

Who can compete with that type of affection? Powerfully written.

[.]

Clearly you've been touched by a poweful love that can transform anyone's life. Bravo for such a devotional piece of poetry Michelle.

[Rip the cowdog]

AN EXCELLENT WORK OF POETRY, SHORT, BUT POWERFUL IN ITS DEVOTION. GOOD WORK....