My secret

A private dedication . . .

He is the light you'll never see That shines beautifully within He can heal the wounds of war And relieve you of your sin He requires nothing, he needs no reward.  Angels that have fallen are not meant to be adored.  But he will always have my heart In this world and the next hell and heaven can't deny me  For it is my free will to give if only he knew,   he is the reason why I live.

Reviews

[Craig Froman]

What an eloquent, lifting dedication... one that shows from where your true beauty and inspiration flow from... May the world discover your secret and find release from their sin and the pain of horrid wars that rage... Living life abundantly is beyond compare, dear poet...

[Lily Mae]

When we find that special someone that feeds those parts of our hearts and souls we are truly blessed.. I'm happy you have found that in your life..xo And I hope he does know..xo

[Orlando Furioso]

Amen to that. We all need such a guiding light, but often don't have one.

[Kyle]

This is wonderful.....I love it.

[WhiteWillow]

A short, and very powerful write. I can feel your intensity as I read this. Nice dedication.

[Tate Morgan]

You seem to do the same thing I do use lower case i.A very interesting and beautiful thought. Personally only thing i would do is change sins to sin .Only to make it singular both ways work

[Reaching for the clouds]

This is an excellent dedication. These words are sweet and full of devotion. Well done!

[The Analog Kid]

This is really a special, personal devotion. Real nice job.

[Kid Kirby]

Very beautiful. I was having a rough day until I happened across your poem. Thank you.

[Varad Keni]

WOW fantastic...!!

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

Thats so beautiful . you played with the words perfectly , until the last line and still now, I am not sure if you meant to dedicate this to God or your best lover :) Great! ... Yossi