A walk

A walk

A Poem by MichelleClay

Sunlight sparkles colours off the dew drops 
The air is fresh and clean
Leaves are green and vibrant
There's not a soul to be seen
Each step i take is springy
Each turn a new surprise
How I often wonder
How people miss this with their eyes
Time escapes this place 
A piece of heaven just for me
I can roam theses woods for hours
Only here am I truly  free 

© 2012 MichelleClay



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You've captured a time when you were appreciative of nature and all its details. There is a spiritual side to it and you caught it through the use of words that brought the feeling for us all to share, if only for a short time. Wonderful poetry Michelle.

Posted 11 Months Ago


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Exquisite Write WOW, such an emotionally charged piece!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


I understand this poem. Good to wander into the forest. Allowed us to think and escape the city and real life. Good description create good visions of a long and peaceful walk. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 1 Month Ago


just simply beautiful

Posted 2 Months Ago


P. Kapper

1 Month Ago

My sentiments exactly
Reminds me of running through the woods, one of my favourite things. Thanks for this.

Posted 2 Months Ago


MichelleClay

2 Months Ago

Thanks for stopping by x
OOoo I know the feeling :) I really love it so much :)

Posted 2 Months Ago


MichelleClay

2 Months Ago

Glad you can relate :)
Very beautiful and light feeling. To explore nature, take in all that she has to offer, experince her magnificent art...no better way to spend a day. very nicely done. This poem has a very easy feel to it, refreshing.

Posted 3 Months Ago


MichelleClay

3 Months Ago

Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it :)
Whow It Is Beautiful :)

Fav Lines:

"I can roam theses woods for hours
Only here am I truly free" / Hmmmmm Lovely Lines! I Love It! :)

So Lovely Michelle!
Enjoyed!

Posted 3 Months Ago


MichelleClay

3 Months Ago

Thank you for the sweet review x
Nature is so full of wonderful gifts. This is a lovely poem with such a positive gait to it.

Posted 4 Months Ago


MichelleClay

4 Months Ago

Thanks for stopping by :) I love nature, you can probably tell!

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Added on April 10, 2012
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MichelleClay

Bedfordshire, United Kingdom



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