Empty

Tear out my black heart
Taste blood from my open wound
Now I am empty

Reviews

[devon]

Holy cow! So few words, such great emotion. Very powerful and strong. Great job!

[}Echo{]

painful, powerful, strong emotion, simply written. Great write.

[Mary]

painfully powerful in simplicity. excellent work.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you:)
God bless

[Jetta Zippora]

So brilliant and lovely. Simplicity is best and these fifteen words are definitely inspiring. Great write, friend. :)

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you very much Jetta:)
God Bless

[Heather]

Powerful imagery there, great work

[Lost in Wonderland]

thank you:)
God bless

[Tai Ryens]

Quite a powerful haiku you have written. I just love the imagery (or shall I say, short video? Hehe) you embed within the mere fifteen words. Impressive haiku indeed.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you very much:) God Bless

[The Watcher]

Short but strong. This is one of the most intense haikus I've seen. Kudos.

100/100

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you:)
God Bless

[The Watcher]

You're very welcome Mickey! =)