Beautiful Despair

Beautiful Despair

A Poem by Lost in Wonderland

I breath in Art

 

Heartbreak's my poetic equation

When life flows hard, I change its path

Using the pain as my inspiration

 

My motto is

Though life isn't always fair 

Choose to see beauty in despair

© 2012 Lost in Wonderland


Author's Note

Lost in Wonderland
Poem for english based off Langston Hughes "Motto" structure. Not sure of I like the ending but this is just sticking to the structure, for this site I may add more...
God has the glory

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Great poem! I really like the moral and concept behind it. Nice job!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

11 Years Ago

Thanks!
`When life flows hard, I change it`s path, using the pain as my inspiration.` I`m sure many of us can connect to these two lines. Very nice.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

11 Years Ago

Thank you:)
God Bless
I loved this! Am shelving it for sure.
Just the first words "I breathe in art" would have been enough for me, but then you wrote two whole more stanzas. Wonderful.

And I love the picture as well. Life is both tragic and beautiful. A bit paradoxical, but true.

Thank you. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

11 Years Ago

Thnak you so much:)
God Bless
Wonderful, I try to do the same.
You've written a brilliant thing in a brilliant way. I think 'using the pain as my inspiration' will stay with me.

nice work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much:)
God Bless
good motto, :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


yea.. like this... :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


So lovely, friend.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

11 Years Ago

Thank you Jetta:)
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Though this is short its a wonderfull poem! Never give up on your motto! 100/100 Great and enjoyable poetry u write, keep writing! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much!
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11 Years Ago

No problem! :)
all great art is made from suffering and so are we - shagrath

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

11 Years Ago

That's an awesome quote
Reminded me of beauty from ashes... the courage to face life head on and to seek the wonders even through the pain and heartbreak that comes our way. You say it so beautifully, and yes, it is a choice...

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on September 11, 2012
Last Updated on September 11, 2012
Tags: Beauty, Pain, Paradox, Strength, Overcome, Despair, Life, Art, Poetry

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