Just one day? Please

"I want him to come here and hold me in his arms
Make me feel bubbly and warm
Teach me how to smile again
and I mean a real smile

Not my usual play pretends

I want to feel his breathy laughs on my neck
As he wraps his arms around my waist
Keeping me close to his heart
Like I'm not a simple toy to waste

I want to feel his tender kisses
Shooing away my tears and fears
Just by knowing he'll love me
For years and years and years

I know he's a million miles away
But can't I at least have one day?"

Reviews

[Pax]

do you know how romantic your words are?
well i can they are and you are too... indeed!!! :)

i guess one perfect monent in our lives we asked for one memory to cherist the most.

very well done my friend.

[Tarry Franck]

Wow! I know exactly how you feel. Have been feeling this way for a couple of years now and finally had my chance this past weekend. It wasn't for very long but to just hold him - all the emotion you put into this poem is what I was able to gain this weekend. I wish you the best of luck that this will come true for you. I can feel your raw emotion in this piece. It hit me straight to the soul. Very well done!!! Thanks for sharing!!!

[Lost in Wonderland]

thank you so much:) I really hope God blesses me with even just one weekend too

[Tarry Franck]

I hope the same for you!!!

[Lost in Wonderland]

thanks! :)

[That_Girl]

Just one perfect day would make it all worth while huh? :) I love it, Mickey.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thanks Avy:)
God bless

[Soul Fire]

Wow...So beautiful..no words..

[Lost in Wonderland]

thank you:)
God bless

[Soul Fire]

You're welcome, God bless

[Kyle Sky]

Truly this is a good piece. I like the last line "But can't I at least have one day?" You really showed true emotion through this piece.

[Lost in Wonderland]

thank you:)

[Forgotten]

This was a great poem and very very sad also. I think you very much deserve to have at least one day with the person you want :)

[Lost in Wonderland]

thank you:) maybe I'll get it some day...

[Forgotten]

I'm sure you will :) Your a very special girl and I'm sure you'll get that very special guy :)

[Lost in Wonderland]

thank you:)

[Daydreamer54]

The poem was beautiful and I thought it perfectily described the picture! Great write! ^^ The last stanza was my favorite.

[Lost in Wonderland]

thanks!! :)
God Bless

[luviva]

ohhh.. this is so emotional the way you pose yo question is thought provoking.. loved it to the core"!

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thanks a bunch:)
God Bless