Beautiful Blue

Beautiful Blue

A Poem by Lost in Wonderland

There's a haze around my eyes
As you walk towards me,
A new light that pulls me.
You are the sun, love
And I am the flower
Growing, winding
Reaching ever for you.

And then I am falling
Plunging into a crystal, blue pool
And you are there too
Looking at me,
Looking at you,
With those eyes I always sought
To be the apple of.

The water surrounds us now
But your lips give me air,
Your kiss brings me life
And for once in all my years on this earth
I am not afraid.
I am in your arms,
And you make me beautiful
You are beautiful.

But the current tears you away
While I stare after you,
All the words I longed to say
Dying forever on my tongue.
As I open my eyes
To dull, yellow walls
My dreams are stolen from me
In the harsh sunlight of reality.

© 2013 Lost in Wonderland



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The water surrounds us now

But your lips give me air,

Your kiss brings me life

And for once in all my years on this earth

I am not afraid.

I am in your arms,

And you make me beautiful

You are beautiful.




But the current tears you away

While I stare after you,

All the words I longed to say

Dying forever on my tongue.

As I open my eyes

To dull, yellow walls

My dreams are stolen from me

In the harsh sunlight of reality.



Thank you again for this wonderful piece.


Blessings. kindred poet

Posted 3 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

3 Years Ago

Thank you!
Benita c Staebelll - KindredPoet

3 Years Ago

you're very welcome. it's my pleasure always. blessings. kindred poet
So beautiful and so much Imaginary I love it.



Thank you for sharing this lovely piece of work.




I simply loved these stanza's lines.


There's a haze around my eyes
As you walk towards me,

A new light that pulls me.

You are the sun, love

And I am the flower

Growing, winding

Reaching ever for you.


The water surrounds us now

But your lips give me air,

Your kiss brings me life

And for once in all my years on this earth

I am not afraid.

I am in your arms,

And you make me beautiful

You are beautiful.




Blessings. Kindred poet

Posted 3 Years Ago


You create a dreamish world of tranquil serenity on a blue canvas... here is a world of life so beautiful... so desirable... so wondrous... until the light shines and washing it all away.. Beautifully bittersweet...

Posted 3 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

3 Years Ago

thank you friend :) God bless
This is a really great poem! I like your use of metaphor throughout the piece.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

4 Years Ago

thank you!
Oh it is perfect! Wonderful and awesome, it flows good and it was a pretty read

Posted 4 Years Ago


"Looking at me/ Looking at you" I love the imagery there. It makes me think of a mirror and the thoughts I used to have about a future with someone I hadn't met yet. good job :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

4 Years Ago

Thank you ^-^
God bless
You are the sun, love
And I am the flower ... Wonderful lines. I adored this poem. You've a nice way to define the spirit of love. I loved the poem. Very nice work. Thanks for penning!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

4 Years Ago

thank you so much for the review:)
God bless
Neon

4 Years Ago

My pleasure!
God bless you too.
Nice. I like how at first the metaphor of the sunlight is growing you like a flower and then it becomes harsh and dull yellow. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

4 Years Ago

thanks for the review:)

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