That Moment

That Moment

A Poem by Lost in Wonderland
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Life can be lovely when you least expect it:)

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It was a mere moment,
I couldn't tell you exactly what time it was,
Exactly how old he was,
(or exactly how drunk he was).
I can't tell you exactly what he looked like,
Exactly what he was thinking,
Or exactly what he saw in me.

However, I can tell you
How smooth his hands were,
Guiding me into a twirl
Like we were at some grand ball
Instead of a hot, sweaty music fest.

I can tell you how soft his lips were,
As they pressed eagerly to mine,
Like the kiss of a butterfly,
With that exhilaration as it's about to fly.

I can tell you how lovely it felt,
As The Cure played in the distance,
And just for one small second 
The world melted away,
And I wanted it to stay that way.

I can tell you how sorry I am I left,
But I can't tell you his name,
And sometimes I regret that I can't.

© 2014 Lost in Wonderland



Author's Note

Lost in Wonderland
I had my first kiss almost a year ago, and I'm just now able to put it into my writing:) Thanks for reading!
God bless <3

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Nicely done! It makes me wish I could remember my first kiss, how long ago that was lol well written, good job

Posted 1 Year Ago


Lost in Wonderland

1 Year Ago

Thank you!
When a moment is as magical as the one you so beautifully describe, no need for a name. ..a name is a label, and these moments shall never have a label. ;)) nicely captured. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Lost in Wonderland

1 Year Ago

Thank you for reading :)
It is the little things in life that count. This piece is uniquely expressed and beautifully written. I almost didn't see your author's note there, but now I can see why these words are real. I also give you credit for the rhyming scheme. I am a sucker for poems that rhyme.

Thank you for sharing.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the review:)
God bless
This is the magic that is love... those moments that melt into us... that we sense awakening... months... years later... Thank you for sharing such a sweet, beautiful deep sigh in the music of your life... Made me smile in my own recollections... :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


This gave me goose bumps, I really enjoyed reading this, I only wish I had more moments like this in my life.
Sometimes it doesn't matter who it is, it matters what we feel and just how memorable the moment is. It's how good the moment is that is the reason that you remember it, and whoever this lad was, he surely made an impact on you. Now you know what you want from all your special moment. I'm guessing it took you a long time just to think of words to describe that moment, because none seemed good enough, for a nameless boy, but a sad and happy moment altogether.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much for this lovely review:) you're so right!
This is a great piece. The first kiss is always very memorable and I loved how you described it. Great job!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

3 Years Ago

thank you :)
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Pax
sweet!

the first will always be remembered, no matter how awkward or wonderful it is... you deliver you piece really well my friend, and since the last time I read your piece, you've grown as really great as a writer, you've expressed this really well, i saw you heart on it. :)
thanks for sharing....

Posted 3 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much for reviewing :)
Pax

3 Years Ago

you are welcome my friend...
I can remember such a moment and this poem brought back the memory so clearly it was if the years simply melted away. The only small difference is I knew his name, but it made no difference, he still left.

Beccy.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

3 Years Ago

Thank you for the review. And I'm sorry he left
A lovely poem. Thank you for sharing...:)....................

Posted 3 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

3 Years Ago

Thank you for reviewing:)
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

You are welcome...:).......................

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