A Chapter by MightyMouse

Tomlin sat happily watching Pests tear at the walls from the front seat of his silver pick up truck. The Pests had swarmed around the place the day after Pip had taken it from him. He came everyday to sit and watch them claw at the walls. “Like mice in a trap.” He says out loud to no one since he’s alone.

They weren’t dead inside there yet, but they would be soon enough. Word had spread quickly around Tomlin’s small army. They all knew what happened to him, and most of them had even contemplated leaving him to join her. That is until they found out what happened to her. Tomlin had even made sure to make up a long gloating speech. He very much forced his men to believe there was nothing left for them but to help him find his family. Giddiness fills him as he drives away for today. He’s going to come back tomorrow and the next day and the day after that until every single person in that building was dead.

© 2016 MightyMouse

Author's Note

This chapter feels a little like it's lacking something. Any ideas what?

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Added on September 7, 2016
Last Updated on September 7, 2016



Dayton, TX

I enjoy writing and I want to know if other people enjoy my writing. I live in a house full of seven people, three of them children, thirteen dogs, and ten cats. I have a twin sister with only one leg.. more..

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