It starts in the end

It starts in the end

A Poem by MikeV
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It starts in the end

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Love is like a butterfly
a butterfly that was once a cocoon
a cocoon that carried life
life frozen in stone
stone so soft
soft like wings of a moth
a moth powdery and white
white as the purest love
love is where it all began
it all began with an egg
an egg from above
above the butterflies leg

© 2013 MikeV



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First of all Science Class!
I like a comparison here...circle pf life and love...
Beautiful
thanks for sharing such awesome write^^

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MikeV

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much :)
Laminators Dubai

4 Years Ago

thanks for a fun write mike^^
Laminators Dubai

4 Years Ago

thanks for a fun write mike^^
I love how the entire thing could start at any point, but you chose to start at the end... makes one think a lot why that is so... and it opens to a lot of possibilities... and definitely, Love.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MikeV

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much :)
I've been toying around with this style of writing
Nice one Mike...and i can tell you are loving this form...Rose:)...Enjoyed.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MikeV

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Rose :)
I'm loving it, it flows a lot smoother
To be honest, I can't .. read more
I like how you spun this with the cocoon and how it all comes around full circle , an evolution of love but you lost me with that last line Mike 'above the butterfly's leg'.....

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MikeV

4 Years Ago

Butterflies lay eggs that turn into caterpillars
That and I couldn't think of anything that rh.. read more
Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Hahaha, that's your answer/ ;-P
MikeV

4 Years Ago

Lmao hey, at least I'm honest :)
That was great Mike:) an awesome writer!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MikeV

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much my friend :)
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4 Years Ago

Your very welcome Mike my friend:)

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MikeV
MikeV

Las Vegas, NM



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