The Mystery Lady

My Valentines Day poem. For the woman I love...even if I don't know who she is yet.

I don’t even know your name

I have no clue if you came.

How can I love someone this much

When we have never even met?

Why do I ache to feel your touch,

When I don’t know who you are yet?

 

I just want a glimpse of your face

To feel the warmth of your embrace

I’m tired of all this waiting

I want to be under your spell

It would help stop my debating

To know you’re waiting as well

 

Who are you? Please say you’re out there.

I will find you, this I will swear.

I want to see your lovely eyes,

I want to hear your charming voice,

But all I hear are my own sighs.

I wait for you, this is my choice.

 

I may not know you at this time:

But for you mountains I would climb,

No forest path would be too long,

No walls that I couldn’t break through,

No enemy would be too strong,

As long as it all led to you.

 

One day I’ll tell you in person,

There is one thing I am certain

Just as sure as the sky is blue

I know in my heart I love you.

Author's Note

Story behind this poem: I've never been in a relationship. I have no idea who she's going to be or if she's even out there. So I began wondering what I would tell her if I could send her a letter. This poem is the result of that.

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

Smarter guys than me would say you 'met an angel' and watched her fly away. And you did it like a Man.


Nice work.

[John Ryan]

This reminds me of a lot of personal moments that id prefer to leave with me and a finite amount of other people.

very nicely done and sweet

[Pixieblue]

This is extremely touching, it relates to a lot of what i've been thinking lately... wondering what the person that you will be with for the rest of your life is like; wondering what they are doing at this moment in time.

[A. Amos]

I absolutely love those verses,  very relateable! amazingly written and well expressed. 

[Ars Goetia Poetry]

Brilliant poem. I wish you all the best in your quest :)

[Gabrielle rose]

It's so sweet, hope you find her

[Holly]

Great poem! Very thoughtful in a hopeless romantic sort of way. Keep waiting for her, it will be worth it :)

[Mike Wolfe]

Thank you, I appreciate your comments!

[Tarella]

Your words flow out from deep within your heart....its a really beautiful poem and whoever she will be,you will find just when the time is right.....

[Mike Wolfe]

Thank you!

[Kalen Luciano]

Great poem! It really is wonderful.

[Mike Wolfe]

Thank you!

[Tina Louise UK]

This is really beautiful Mike, she is out there somewhere... :) x

[Mike Wolfe]

Thank you! I appreciate that!

[Pixieblue]

This is extremely touching, it relates to a lot of what i've been thinking lately... wondering what the person that you will be with for the rest of your life is like; wondering what they are doing at this moment in time.