New Flame

New Flame

A Poem by Dave G.
"

I swear I didn't just have a one night stand.

"

Feelings swelter

My love is gonna melt her

Fiery, flaming fire

Is what I felt, when I felt her

 

Seeking passion

Is all I can imagine

Risky, taking risks

When I ask what I’m asking

 

Feel a new flame, new flame

Burning you

I feel that new flame, new flame

Burn me too

 

Feelings blister

I don’t care, I can get hurt

Kooky, kind of kiddy

Was the kiss, when I kissed her

 

Seeking danger

She’s the instigator

Sexy, sexed sex

Is so strange, with a stranger

 

Feel a new flame, new flame

Burning you

I feel that new flame, new flame

Burn me too

 

Feeling lonely

This was a one and only

Savory, so I’m saving

 The show that she showed me

 

Seeking eager

I’m a non-believer

Lovely, love, loving

That I can leave here and leave her

 

Feel a new flame, new flame

Burning you

I feel that new flame, new flame

Burning out

© 2011 Dave G.


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Wow! Really loved this Dave! Enjoyed the story behind it and the cascading effect from start to end... I kinda almost wanted to me be there... very sensual... Your use of words was very unusual and very effective too... "sexy, sexed sex" and "lovely, love, loving"....very creativel!! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Kim
Simply amazing, I really enjoyed this write.
I assume they are lyrics. Awesome job!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Dave G.
Dave G.

Chicago, IL



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