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Definitions of love

The peace in your eyes,
As the blue in the skies.
It makes me loose track of time,
And memories,with seconds, sublime.
Like sugar in milk, I get lost in your eyes,
Far from treachery,away from lies.
Unimaginable to find a more tranquil place,
Your serenity,my turmoils, it does erase.
A smile that can consume the black hole,
Can put life back into a rag doll.
As you look at me, my breath stops,
And like sunshine my gaze drops.
Every nerve ending set aflame,
Heart beats like jack hammer, impossible to tame..

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

Wonderfully penned down the emotions of a loving heart. I loved the similes and rhyme.
Last fourth line it should be 'breath'

[Mikku]

Thanks a lot... I'll surely change that

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.