Dear soul

A message for innocent souls

You break, but you mend yourself,
You fall, but you pull up yourself.
The bullet of words meandering through heart,
The shallow breath begins to depart.
The lungs protest against the foreign air,
But you DO know, life is never fair.
Broken promises, shattered trust,
Over the soul, insecurity forms a crust.
You build a wall, oh so tall,
Promise yourself to never again fall.
Fall for fake faces, fall for false love,
You promise yourself to rise above.
But when he approaches you, a situation arises with which you never dealt,
Crumbles the wall, and again your stupid heart did melt.
When are you gonna understand it's just death's knell,
Dear life, it'll burn you alive, sentencing you to hell.

Reviews

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The bullet of words meandering through heart" my fav line. In the heat of moment it feels as if the pain will never end and then we heal and move on

[Mikku]

Thanks a lot

[Mustafa Merchant]

Not all walls crumble. Some walls are built to just stay. Allot could be related. Good words.

[Mikku]

Thanks a lot

[Najam Us Saher]

Couldn't be more perfectly expressed. It do reads like a letter to self. Very impressive, great job!

[Mikku]

Thanks a lot for your appreciation

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.