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Liar

Liar

A Story by Mila
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A 6-word story for a contest! :)

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Pain doesn't lie like love does.





© 2015 Mila



Author's Note

Mila
Jotted this down for a 6-word story contest! I was just curious to see if I could pull one off, so I hope you guys like it!

Reviews=motivation!

-Mila

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I find this truth to actually remind me of a lot of things I see on the Telly or in books, where the character doesn't realize that the "lover" lied to use them in their own use. Simple and to the point and I like!

Good job and I wanna see other 6 letter stories that you come up with if you ever do :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mila

2 Years Ago

Thank you!!



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so very true. love this, it's straight forward

Posted 5 Months Ago


so truthful, very well done.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Brilliant. As a fan of the six word story myself I enjoy reading other people's work. They're a true test of a writer, to see how much information they can convey, how much of a story they can tell with only those six words. they should be fully loaded like this. Wonderful. L.

Posted 1 Year Ago


this is heartbreaking, honest, and true. well done

Posted 2 Years Ago


I love this! So true and so full of meaning in just six words!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Well said, reminds me of haiku. Would be hard to beat in a 6 word contest. Tainted love always brings pain.

Posted 2 Years Ago


I find this truth to actually remind me of a lot of things I see on the Telly or in books, where the character doesn't realize that the "lover" lied to use them in their own use. Simple and to the point and I like!

Good job and I wanna see other 6 letter stories that you come up with if you ever do :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mila

2 Years Ago

Thank you!!
Oh my gosh! This literally hit me in the face the moment I read it, I was like Ohhhh! And then Ouch! So very true. Excellent job!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

In six words you produced a story, pain doesn't lie like love does. I know that statement to be very true from all the people who claim to love you only for it later to be revealed a lie. Though no matter what pain is just pain always true and needs no justification to be true. Great Work

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mila

2 Years Ago

Thank you!!
Malister Mikey

2 Years Ago

your welcome
WOOOOOW, Its beautiful
keep it up :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mila

2 Years Ago

Thank you!!! :)
leen

2 Years Ago

Welcome :)

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Added on July 7, 2015
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Tags: 6 words, pain, love, story, short

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Mila
Mila

St. Louis , MO



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ALL WINNERS FROM MY CONTESTS WILL HAVE THIER WORKS FEATURED ON MY WATTPAD ANTHOLOGY WITH FULL CREDIT GIVEN TO THEM! PLEASE LET ME KNOW WELL BEFORE HAND IF YOU DO NOT WANT ME TO FEATURE YOUR WORK! A.. more..

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