Losing me, Losing you

Losing me, Losing you

A Poem by Millie
"

With losing your self you lost the one you loved

"

If the day had ended

Like it began

I could say we'd be suspended

 In the love that shared

The way that we cared

Endless bliss

Not to be missed

 As the devils creeps In just one kiss

Not with you

I lost myself

In losing me I was losing you

That last embrace 

The one with me

And the one with you I wanted to keep

The one with me and the one with you

Losing me, Losing you

© 2011 Millie


Author's Note

Millie
This is how I feel about someone I know I shouldn't this way about. . . Nothing in this poem actually happened :) if grammars wrong go head and tell but I might already know so it will be a waste of time :).Xxxxxxxxxx

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Added on February 27, 2011
Last Updated on March 26, 2011
Tags: Romance, lose, despetion

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Millie
Millie

Portsmouth, Copner, United Kingdom



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