Blissfully Unaware

Blissfully Unaware

A Poem by Millie
"

If everything could stop for just a few moments i would give everything all i had to give.

"

The tears stop, they fall

They carsh

Time begins to slow

Red reams are realised

Could this be the start of a happy ending

One small slice and it feels like the end of time

I could be happy like this

Unaware 

Of all terror that stays

Unknowing

All the damage that has been done

Slice one . . .

Slice two. . .

Slice Three. . .

Bliss

Softly draining all the life

In exchange for a few moments

I know all i do and all i defend

Is wrong

But it feels so. . . so

Right

Blissfully unaware unknowingly

I could stop before they do

© 2011 Millie


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Millie
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Great depth in this piece ...... nice work.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Millie
Millie

Portsmouth, Copner, United Kingdom



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